Animation Workshop Feedback - Desislav Georgiev #19 (2023)

[Music] all righty new version let's check it out some shake all right cool I like it yeah it's neat let me just see all different steps that I keep torturing about I love the little speaking of steps hold on it's a wrong tool here love the little steps here big aggressive into that looks a lot less ik that's good yeah there's some keep alive in there every now and then on something like this when it goes back like that it has a slight ik feel it's mostly just that bend in that wrist and then you go back the way kind of the wrist stays I know it's super tricky because you're holding you're holding it it's definitely a lot better it's probably moments like these when it's just kind of going straight down and it's minimized by keeping the arms kind of together with the chest usually I critique you know where it's like everything moves as one unit and you got to loosen up and break things up where it's a chest the head hips and all that stuff and having you know not like arms all that as one but with this it might help you a bit more to get rid of that ik feel but it's definitely a lot better watch out on something like this you go back and it kind of pops into a straight and then it's extending stretching a little bit I would just soften that pop so it doesn't like it really feels like a locked scale type of thing and then and on that path here again this here is a bit straight this way that makes it bit look a bit ik so you have maybe a little bit of rotation in the wrist overall maybe you can kind of adjust the grip a little bit give us a bit more of an arc into this so it doesn't feel like you're doing this right now and then it stops a bit abruptly here going up there so just overall that beginning Arc could be pushed and then same thing here you're going back with his hand and then bam here especially hit that wall versus a little bit of bit of an arc in there I don't mind the the harsh stop here so that adds to that intensity like the looks there thing the eyes and the Brows that's [Music] cool yeah and I like the look back yeah that's great and then the back and forth so we got Dino guy then goes back yeah guy looks first could probably be a little bit the way you have it here with a little bit of chest up let me just see and then here a little bit more it's a little bit isolated in here I know this was a part of the model but I think it would help you a little bit so if I go this look at the dinosaur and then a little bit out the corner of my eye I see this and I think if you do a head turn and like this line here goes up to here maybe a bit less so it's not just in here cuz I like that you keep going with this right it goes and because of that repetition you're more likely to see what's going on there with this I think the tongue is a bit loose I think it be a bit faster you can probably have a like one and then drops and then the rest it kind of stays here and more high frequency head um Jitter it's a bit Lo and the head does a little bit of back and forth I think that could just be shortened up a little bit and watch out I'm not sure if that's what's going on there it feels like from here to here hold on like there all right to there feels like we're almost scaling stretching that part of the the skull here in the neck watch out but yeah I think otherwise look at him creature a bit bigger will look back here then we can look back here then he goes over with a little bit of going up again not too much because you do want to have enough room to go into here but you know you can always go all Al a bit straighter up which then will make this a bit higher as well then drop it like I'm out of here this is a bit sticky so you let go and then watch out it feels like we're going it's the hand no well this goes through here no it's okay that's good but then it feels like it lands into sand which I I guess it could that's up to you to the side but then I feel like the steps and everything that looks more like on rock you know like little Pebbles here this is rock as well so I will probably hit here and then this bounces up this goes down so the staff is more like this so the spear more and then again because of those steps that's fine here and then he runs looks back that's great I like how elevated the head is then looks over that's great Mama yeah so great I love it that's all cool something like this you can see all that bending here a bit of a shifting of the weight and it kind of stops here so you want have a bit of a flattening maybe with a side roll tiny bit so that we fill in here here there's a bit more pressure there's so much going on it's a bit of more weight shifting and like final apology you're so close to all this and I wonder if during the I'm professing uh dino ignorance here but I wonder if this is too human to make a fist and to make this more like really tense curled fingers it's almost feels human but I could be wrong just a thought but that's some great offsets there steps are good again on that and then he leans it well there's a camera we can barely see it I think you should be fine it's going to S on this bit display compression but barely see this what about the uh protector here cool oh yeah then we don't stop top way you had it kind of cutting out a bit sooner yeah great offset and changes in here for contrast let me look at the feet if they look a bit soft no no no no it's cool it feels like you got some spreading up the toes there it's great yeah that's it's probably all I have looking at this section here as he gets up if you want to have a little bit of little bit of drag during this and then come back up but it's good that it's curved down it's not like dog going up here yeah it's cool I like the end pose they're more overlapping as so they're more of a unit together some good separation for silhouette good Clarity in there yeah and the cameras need too we're in the upper third it's not quite centered and me go down ready for this but it's subtle I like that it's it's almost like a bit of a dissipation but but without really telegraphing it too much and giving us some good good framing there if app is super picky this line here just goes right into that and I I will probably lower it so it's like that that's not too bad either you're just hitting the right way but I like just he the separation of it so I think you can afford to just have that stone be that cutting in here I this is super picky but like even here Stone line is right where that tail is might as well bring this up here going of cheat it for super clear Clarity in all the lines and everything and that's kind of that all right thank you all right there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whenever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like And subscribe would be awesome all right thank [Music] you